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Arwen Evenstar by ~LadyCyanide:iconLadyCyanide:

Categories Traditional Art > Drawings > Portraits & Figures

©2006-2009 ~LadyCyanide
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Ok, ok, so ti doesn't look like Arwen. I don't care that her face is too round, part of it is how the picture was taken (yes, I have no scanner, so I took a picture an dsophped it up a bit - kind of looks like a low-quality scan, no?)
But it's ok.

Feedback, please! I need help improving. I'm not a very good artist, but I like to draw anyways. x)

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~Mydian Apr 29, 2006, 10:58:30 PM
I'm not a good drawer myself, so I can't be much help to be honest. ^^;

The mouth seems to be too forward facing instead of to the left as it should be with her head turned in that direction. Foreshortening and perspective are not my strong area. :P I'm so bad at it. Looks good to me as far as proportions go though! :)

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~LadyCyanide Apr 30, 2006, 4:58:00 AM
Not much help? Even the littlest thing helps loads! =D

Looking now, I see you're definitely right. xS I've never really had any formal art training, so my perspective knowledge is pretty much zero. Thank you so much! :hug:

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~Mydian Apr 30, 2006, 8:42:17 AM
:giggle: Same here. I had art class in high school, but we never really did much. And you're welcome! :hug:

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~Lenny1991 Apr 30, 2006, 9:28:56 AM
Finally something from you again! :hug:
The proportions are very well yet! The hair is well done, too. You could shade more (my problem always, too :D) and the neck is a bit too big.
Like it!

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*XullraeZauviir Apr 30, 2006, 8:30:05 PM
She has lovely eyes. :D

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~LadyCyanide May 7, 2006, 7:20:52 AM
She does, doesn't she? =)

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~LadyCyanide May 7, 2006, 7:22:35 AM
I know, I'm a horrid updater. x)
Thank you! I hate shading, I always screw it up, but I suppose I could definitely do it some more. I see what you mean, her neck's about the size of her face. x|.

But thank you, for criticism *and* compliments! =D

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~LadyCyanide May 7, 2006, 7:24:07 AM
We have art class and we do the same thing every year ... never drawing. x)

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~Mydian May 7, 2006, 10:17:40 PM
Know what you mean. :P We did cool projects though, with stuff like welding and jewelry making. That so rocked.

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